The story is well-paced but there were some instances about the MC that really confused me as a reader. But still, it's a well-written story despite the grammar errors. And I am curious to know how the story goes.
Love your marksman system book its amazing. exceptional character growth, you watch an underdog grow slowly. not just take this green ray, bam your the hulk. its nice, I enjoy it so far. one of my favorite reads on here, wish I knew how to contact you on here though. keep it up one of my favorite authors also.
It is fun to read, if you are harem lover you would love this novel. The downfall is the heroines trying to escape their future brainless infatuated self but became one for the MC instead, well it's pretty okay since atleast they are thinking rationally a lil bit now. Just looking forward for a heroine who wouldn't be dependent to MC. The good thing is I'm simple minded who enjoy novels and sometimes ignore plotholes.
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To be honest. The story is pretty good and well written. But the side storys, in which side characters are introduced are way to long. Tbh it feels like there are less chapters about the mc then there are about side characters. And even if the focus shifts back to the mc its not rly relevant or a major part of the story. Last time he just ate/consumed some rocks and talked with a weird lazy silver guy.And the impact these side characters at the end have arent nearly worth the chapters it took to introduce them and flesh out there personality. (at least the last time)The last "antagonist" (the dude with the weird item) just randomly got eaten by the mc after his plotarmor broke.It just feels stretched and unaccessary.Anyway i hope this isnt the case with this New bad guy and i hope that there will be more focus on the actual mc of the story.Currently at chapter 49Hope you have a great day.Bye
I don't read this genre but still I recommend it to someone who enjoy reading action, exploration, and tunnels. Skye is a remarkable person n your novel. The idea is fresh and interesting. I enjoyed how you depicted events from the viewpoint of the main character while keeping the side characters alive.
really good novel, structure , grammar, and development is on point. chapters are frequent and the characters are likable and feel real. really liking it so far :)
Rambut di atas kepala Makhluk Puji bergetar ke sana kemari. Antena merah muda gemuk terulur, dan di ujung antena ada batu kristal sintetis yang berkedip-kedip.
Her father's arm was entwined with hers and was holding up an act but was on the inside terrified that his little girl has grown. He was a good guy who at first was against them being together but much to my consent he was a little bit happy with her decision a little bit.
Seated before a glass panel where form the other side a woman in her mid-thirties wearing an orange jumpsuit was sending a deceitful smile back. "You have come again."
