Remarriage: A Novel - Reviews

it became really bad in the latest chapters like a chapter from 700+ where the chapter can be easily summarizes to few sentences but the chapter is filled with hundreds of words just to describe it and the story becomes so slow where an arx that can be completed in 5 chapters became 10 because of really long filler words

The novel has potential. It's nicely paced and even though there are some grammar problems, it doesn't pose much reading difficulty to me and I easily grasped what's going on. Folks, give it a try. It's a hidden gem.

Waiting on next chapter senpai. Keep being awesome! I love your writing style. After I read a chapter by you, I feel inspired to continue writing. So, no matter what, you can't quit. Your story is legendary. Love you senpai!Yours truly, Ellendria

Senator Armstrong, well let copy paste just to send this out..................................................................................................................................................................................................................Done.

You have a potentially good story. I would suggest you write a bit of world-building because I am confused about the setting of the story. is it in China or somewhere else? I would like to see descriptions of places and characters. I also would advise you to look up how to write in the active tone of voice instead of passive. this story has some grammar issues. other than that keep up the good work.

I like the idea of the story, and it deserves 5 stars for it, but the mc and side characters' actions aren't what would really happen. The mc is sometimes smart and sometimes downright stupid. I think the mc and side characters' actions should be improved on. Otherwise everything else is good as the writing quality is quite good and the chpater lenght is nice. I would definitely recommend this book to be read by others. Sometimes, you need to ignore the dumb actions made by the mc, simp mc*.Mc: Every time somebody accepts a womans request, that acts like a little girl. Bro has had multiple chapters to change his personality, but the next chapter bro is again the same that he was before.Points to ignore while reading:Mc personalitySidecharacters personalityPower level with the mcs wives. Bros girlfriends have like 1 skill but are still almost as strong as him. Like, bro has 10 skills, but  bro gets 18 kills of a D rank while some random girl gets 14 D rank kills with just a slightly bigger mp amount and a single spell. Bro himself has like 3 spells. He should be at least like 5 times stronger than all those side characters. Like at least equal to a peak C rank peak.If I were this mc, I would do much better. Even if I am scared, I would still have a change of heart after experiencing life and death situations. This guy is just the same, and the author explains it with him wanting to fight a lot and liking the thrill of it, but still, if he were like that, it would show in his notmal actions but bro just scared of everything when sth happens. But when there are dungeon outbreaks, bro goes in without question, and when in the fighting place, bro still fights that champion without knowing anything about him even though he already got the sword. It wasn't like he didn't have any other way to gain control of the sword. The sword is so strong, but gaining control of it just takes just a few lines.These are all the things to ignore when reading the first 100 chapters or so. Still, it's a good read, but I would still be a better mc.

Diran: Then come back to me please

The old man wanted to investigate this man if possible but he was too busy with preparation.

-Jove: "What do I do brother, as now I can become a Mari ..." just at that moment that Jove wanted to finish that sentence Ace that appeared out of nowhere punches him in the face, the Jove get shot to the ground bird goes flying to see how Jove was and looked at Ace with rage

"The pond water"

People screamed and shouted, jumped up and down to the rhythm of the music. Jessica and Pauline moved to the front of the stage for a better view. Something was about to happen, all right.

    The second gift from him also came because I bought her gift. When I heard this I asked the Oracle that is it every time a person give something to her that a person will received something in returned from other people?