Rejected by the Alpha, Marked by the Tyrant King - Reviews

Few chapters, needs more updates, but good overall

I've read thus back then in my old account and realized i haven't written a review of this. God forbid how much I hate this novel. I love the first few parts but then.. the progress is just too fast and the ending sucks. Could've been longer but meh.

Aside from a few minor nitpicks, this is a very well-constructed story. I dig the premise and so have added this to my library. The first chapter drew me in like a prize tuna, and I can't wait for the payoff.

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Whoaa.. it's amazing! I really love the adventure genre like this so much, especially this powerful ML. Also, there's a scent of One Piece's little bit that the lead wanna follow his dream and fight for his life. The lead will surely become the martial artist king lol. That's the reason why I wanna read and follow til the end.

After leaving our horses we went and on the rough and rocky path up the mountain. It had been a while since I've been here and as we walked up the rough path, I felt a bit of nostalgia which made me reminisce about the times me and Sven had here.

The idea was he was going to give Meep the ability to craft a watering can by using a good sized rock. He would find a smaller one and slowly carve out a hole that could hold water and use it to tend to the sunflowers. There was just the fact that he had no source of water.

Hey guys, I just wanted to say that I have never been scammed after meeting SD. I have my own group now, and I am still doing what I like doing best. If you play Roonscape, maybe we can meet up once! I may post more chapters in the future. But I will not post my scams, because they are working.. and working well.

Now alone in his room, Michael kept looking at the sturdy plan outlining the exit with the old books on his lap.

What went wrong? Was I just stupid? Was I blind? What did I do wrong?When I first met you, you were very mysterious. I barely even knew your name. You slowly began opening up about your life. How you aren't like everybody else. How you don't belong here. How you don't fit in. How you wrote a dissertation about her. How you deeply admired her. How you even loved her.  How did I not see this before? You are depressed because of this girl. I did not know how to feel. My heart dropped. Sank. From its core. Tears began filling up my eyes. Felt as if someone reached down. Grabbed my heart. Stepped onto it. Broke it into pieces. Watched me fall into pieces. Left me. To bleed from the pain. What could I have done to be better? Could I have just ignored you? Could I have just have never seen you? If I could turn back time. I would. Why couldn't I have been smarter? You took away my happiness. My pride. My existence.

-- SidMat

If Fan Tian Yi still dared to stare at Ye Ruwei with those squinting, lewd eyes, he would most probably not control himself and give Fan Tian Yi a beating on the spot.