The idea of the story is excellent and had me invested almost immediately.The plot moves a little fast, but that isn’t much of an issue.Writing quality is pretty good, very few mistakes.Overall, this is an excellent idea, but it’s execution needs refinement. I do not follow the logic for many of the actions the characters take, and plot holes are prevalent, especially in the early chapters.With a bit of rewriting and editing this could be a 5/5 story; keep it up author!
