Reincarnated with a Country Creation System - Reviews

Death is a very complicated subject and I love a good plot that surrounds it. The mystery and the thriller it gave me to read your novel was unmeasurable.. The story was built quite well too. Great work!!Keep it up :)

Why are you stealing the hard work of others? To all those who don’t know, this novel is already completed on another site and this is not the original author

Trash!!!!! The MC walks a Shura’s path, meaning he lets a deadly betrayer and numerous deadly enemies gather to kill him and his people. Never taking the initiative, waiting to be attacked, not finishing them off and letting them escape.

An elf can be a king or queen among the Elfin. All it takes is absolute devotion to our people. —Wisdom of the Eldar........................

Despite all other unfavorable comments, I still love this book. To me, it's by far very interesting.Translation is fine and consistent. Expecting for more chapters.

I like the  way your story is progressing but the mc  seems a little ****** to me. Also are you still writing this ? ?????????????

13+ chapters in and I can really say for sure that this one's a lot better than the original one, that one is not bad, but this one is a lot better. I just paraphrased what Daniiii said.?For the writing quality, I'd give it a 5. Why? Because I want to. Ugh, because there are hardly any mistakes and grammatical errors. The words used to describe what is happening and what's in Evin's mind are able to express those scenes clearly. Story development, there are a lot of changes here that author made, and I love those changes. The pacing of the story isn't as slow as the original one, just as author promised. For the characters, I love the changes you made with each and every one of their own stories. I especially like the concept you thought of with Endra's spirit or whatever his name here is and Evin's. Now I'm wondering how different the other characters are. Lasty, this world background, author made a lot of changes, but I'm sure he will do a good job here. That's all for now... maybe will add a few things next time.

But now that she thought about it. . .

Boxes, plastic folding containers and ribbons. Food colouring, one 12 cup muffin tray, gold and silver foil cupcake liners and brown cupcake liners. White gold glitter, 3 1kg packets of fondant, 20 packets of icing sugar, extra plastic piping bags, 2 Ateco 887 piping nozzles and a rose mould because his got eaten by the dog back at home.

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