the idea of the story is interesting, the development not so much, since there are some stupid and unnecessary dramas, the system can be ordered so that a better presentation, the "MC" is meh, it leaves much to be desired, in conclusion, with a good edition, plus the elimination of unnecessary and stupid dramas, change the attitude of the "MC" a bit, because his attitude is pathetic, give a better order to the system, the history would be polished and he would reach the top 3.