An amazing novel, a definite must read for all those peeps out there.
So first is writing quality, which I hope and believe is completely top tier. If it isn't then please come and get into my pants about it, cause I'm the editor and it's my job to make sure the writing is as tippy top as possible. So yeah, if they're any mistakes, you all can blame it on me. 5 stars for this of course.
Next is the stability of updates, and since this is a fairly new novel, I will only be giving it 4 stars like all the other new novels I review, as this category isn't applicable yet.
After is story development, which I think is at a pretty good pace. It's not the greatest, but it's not the worst either. Like, it doesn't make you want to read each chapter with a fervor like Solo Leveling, but it isn't a slog or a bad read. The pace is fine, and the story so far is creative and unique. A solid 4 stars.
The 4th is character design, and well, it's another 4 stars just due to the fact that the protagonist, although has his special features, is made up of like two generic stereotypes. The first is that he's a calculating guy, referred to as a prodigy a lot of times in the novel. The second is that he's courageous and will sacrifice himself to protect his comrades. So, both these make up the main character, making him pretty generic, but, what're you gonna do about it? Most characters on the platform are like this anyways, and I believe that you guys will like him. Also, don't wanna spoil, but he gets a lot more interesting as the story progresses, so read it for that.
Lastly, there's the world background, an excellent 5 stars. Honestly, this is the first time that I've heard a story like this, so full points on the uniqueness. Like, all novels on this platform are like, system this, system that, but in this one, the MC is the system, not the host. This presents a certain uniqueness that I hope you all will like.
So, overall, a pretty good novel. I would definitely recommend this to someone in passing, and I believe that it has a lot of potential.
Good job author!