This is very good , is a Novel with a true unlimited potential , and that I want to say is ,
First : please don’t abandon the novel , if you write it good you can obtain a first class novel or even a top novel in this page.
Second: if he Is the world I was thinking about he can be something similar to the Heavenly Dao of the novels, that ones who have conscience, like the one of “Journey of the fate destroying emperor” , this is just an idea
Third: YOU CAN DO IT , PLEASE CONTINUE THIS , this remember me to some novels that have a lot of potential and it would be a waste to abandon it
( yes I’m traumatized with that because that is VERY common in web novel, please don’t do that i need to go with the therapist another time)