Reincarnated as a Strongest Beast Kin - Reviews

This is interesting... The way you write it is so clear and descriptive. It has good potential and I hope you will continue writing. Keeping this in my library to keep me updated.

Decent story, not great by any means but it's not horrible ether. would probably be a good story to read while looking for other books or waiting for a new chapter on your favorites.

this book is amazing and I cant wait for the next chapters to come out. Amazing work author you should be proud of yourself and the work you put in

I realy just wanted to write you a private message but couldn't find how sorry its a somewhat bad review but i will explain as much as i can and hopefully it will help in some way. Please take it as a constructive critism.After getting that out of the way the next section:Writing Quality - pretty good no mispelled words or typos in general so thats a plus.The writing style on the other hand could be better - the way you describe the outside world and the character's inner world is either lacking or childish either way i suggest you reaserch and practice more on those - will be mentioned again on 'characters'.Stability of Updates - every day! which is way better than most so 5/5 on that.Story Develepment - Pretty bad realy, the story is more 'character driven' meaning MC going around doing what feels right with no concrete theme or plot.Example of a plot: "we need to destroy this evil ring in a distant and dangerous place" cliche i know but its a good classic plot.another point regarding plot - i would like to introduce a thing to you called 'Chekhov's gun' basically its a term based on a saying of a famous writer, he said thus: "If in the first act you have hung a pistol on the wall, then in the following one it should be fired. Otherwise don't put it there."(Please research this further it involves more princple and will help you!)What i'm saying is: you have randomness in the story, now surprises or "suddeness" for lack of better word, is not bad but randomness is, what i mean is if a hungry wolf showed and begged for leftovers near the fire he doesnt just bolt right away and never apears again he should be back some day and it will be relevant (if you did things well that is) but you barely gave it one paragraph we know so little about that wolf that even if he did come back it will not be cool or meaningful.we slowly make our way into --World Background - because the same point is relevant there as wellin some instances MC is walking around town talking to merchants, buying/selling or admiring merchandise.when in that town they stay at an in and you gave some attention to a Lily character that worked there.in all those situation and MORE there is no effing interactions!! ZERO!!!he doesnt talk to the barmaid at all, the cool merchant selling the most expensive enchnted wepons just nods once at the MC friend while polishing a sword.Even the cool hammer thing didn't have a symbol so they can later find the blacksmith of the thing and establish some connction.Basically you show zero planning ahead, more than that, you leave your world barren from the thing that give life to a world like local rumors/humor/sayings/etc and that leaves your world building in the gutter compared to what it COULD be.Character Design - In a first look it looks like they are a bit 2 dimensional, like their inner world isnt very well developed but i tend to belive you have a good grasp of the chrarcter you want them to have, but just CANT bring it out properly meaning you don't express them correctly or well enough which connects us to style which i discussed before.Thank you fo reading this far and sorry about the spelling which is probably not perfect. I hope i got my points across and hope you will notice such things and plan better as you go along.I would also like yo point out i don't hate the story and may continue to read it my personal enjoyment is 7/10 which is pretty good.There is more to say but this should be good for now.

Shocked to find a hidden gem here. Kind of reminded me "Mother of Learning" with the modern times DnD-like setting. For those who are tired up of recent cliché and copycats tide, this is rare good change.

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honestly if it where released on its own I would say it was decent but this is literally a carbon copy of another novel that released this month, I don't know which one was written first but the other one is better written in my opinion.              that being said I also like the system in this novel better seeing as there have been so many sign in systems released in the last few months, i definitely prefer a upgrade based system.

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I'm writing this review at chapter 28 and so far there is amazing world building and the characters have good depth to them. I really love reading it so far

I like the novel and I am just curious if the MC gonna teach the heroines the duel cultivation technique he has in the future if so, I think it’s pretty good because all the other cultivation novels I have read only have the MC having to duel cultivation techniques, but not the heroines and it would be pretty good if the technique has a buff For an effect afterwards, but that’s my opinion and you don’t have to listen to it but so far I like the novel and the novel is Interesting and I hope you keep on updating it and keep on doing what you’re doing because I think the novel could be a pretty good novel and I hope that it will not end and discontinues even if you have to take a year off to think about more stuff about the novel and I think that could be One of the top 10 novels at this rate

He waited, and waited...for the sun to go down...

Even the it was not peak hour, and in fact a couple hours before dawn, there were still around 5,000 workers working in the building; the rest were probably asleep as they were off-duty at this time.