Reincarnated as a snake? - Reviews

Just another reincarnation story, so if you have good ideas, suggestions or just complains let me know. I think this story could become something great...
Feel free to write some comments and reviews!
And don´t forget to stay healthy!

This is a good novel.                                                                  
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Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

haven't started it yet but I hope he's venomous you'd be shocked how little people use venom or poison. and for someone like me who love snake's its just ridiculous.

So it's obvious the author is just messing around so I'll give it the pro's and con's.
pro
- It's a reincarnated into a snake.. that's about it.
- the action is ok.

con
- the grammar is horrible.
- obvious rip off of chrysalis but much worse.
- The way you announce the change to first and third person is annoying.
- Even though it is a fantasy there should be at least some common sense logic.
- The system and leveling lacks detail.
- The story jumps very quickly into action before we can really even get a feel of what's happening.
- Again things happen just to happen..

I'm pretty tired of the same "English is not my native language" then don't write in English lol. This story is all over the place and I've only gone through the first 10 chapters. The author is just writing on the fly instead of actually Mapping out the story. 2.5/5

Wow! What an amazing novel. Keep it up! I especially like your style, but your storytelling is also very nice! I am waiting for the next story!

So far this little story has some attention of mine
Most novels only focus on the MC but this one like Overlord, it has deepth and backgrounds for side characters and the world itself
I would like to have some suggestions such as adding things that other novels don’t so that it will make your novel stands out and unique
Keep it up I will give you 2 stone per day

Love it till now so keep it up
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I'm liking the novel so far. Hopefully there will be more chapters ?.

Also I hope the mc doesn't get a human form, it's so overdone. Hopefully he just stays a snake.

Also I'm not really a fan when the monsters end up evolving into more than what their species are. Say a snake turning into a dragon or growing wings.

If flight is an issue just use air magic lolol

Dear author,

I wish you good luck because I quit my request on making a same novel as yours.

That's why I decided to write a new novel called as "Constellation Awakening".

I'm truly sorry for using your novel title without asking permissions, I don't even know that you also have the same idea as mine.

Fascinating Story. better then most books i have read so far. I want more chapters. keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!