In all honesty, it's a good idea but poorly executed. The world building is nice, and the character designs were pretty good. But the powers are just confusing as hell, and that part feels massively rushed. Obviously a character gets stronger as time goes on, but i feel like the whole Ashura thing got revealed way too early and the different "systems" (shadows, chaos, darkness, the eye, forgemastering, the new body,...) were put way too close togheter, which makes it a confusing mess. Give the readers time to digest the powers and how they work because releasing them so close to one another just makes it confusing. The worldbuilding is great, though, and im a pretty big fan of how the politics work. But the power system needs work.