Reborn With The Author System - Reviews

This novel has been here for a year and no one has reviewed it. I will take a look.

The problem with the novel is that, you don't know when the settings/place/scene change.
Something like:

[Jaime smiled as he kiss the horse's *ss and began to prepare the spell.

In the throne of the blah blah kingdom, there was this skeleton with a big black dong... ]
Something like that. From my experience from other novels, there was supposed of atleast
'*****' when changing some scene so that readers won't be confuse.

This was a great read, and at times I wanted to strangle someone but was worth it all in the end.

Gonna give it a shot.

from what I can read so far I like it a lot  I really enjoyed this story from book one till now .  It has pretty much a bit of everything sad parts , happy parts , romantic parts ,violence so much more I'm hooked thank you kay pearson