It’s an amateur writing but promising as well. I feel like the 2 chapters should have been combined as one rather than 9 pages or 10 pages per chapter. I couldn’t finish it it’s way too long and repetitive,
loving this story!!! please update it soon I can't wait for the ending!!!! (just please don't make it one of those stories with pointless details to make it longer! its been great so far and I really hope it stays that way) great job author!!
