Nice book with interesting premise and an intriguing plot, the characters and world background are nice with just a few errs. The grammar, pacing and writing quality is simply better than that of his pass works. Although the book is pretty nice, I do believe other aspects like that narration and fleshing out of characters could be improved. Overall, the book is amazing for a quick read and I'mma adding this to library. Good Job Mel, and keep fighting!