✅Logical school life✅Good vampire progression✅Interesting npcs❌Short chapters (Author has other novels to write so its understandable.)❌Ability system (Author didn't reveal much about it so I won't complain for now.)❌MC couldn't accept his godsend power (Honestly I think his ignorance about him being a vampire after system told with so many ways is a little forced by the author. Well come on.. He doesn't live in cave and hunt mammoths for living every teenager has some fantasies about vampires theese days but of course he may think drinking blood for living is gross so I won't complain about it too.)Overall it's a good read.
I like the story but it has been around 50 chapters but I barely know about MC’s friends’ characters like they were his best friends but were introduced and suddenly left, nothing about what’s happening in real world. Where is his body now in real life since his soul is trapped and etc etc. Majority of focus is on him fighting monsters. Barely any conversation with characters other than Aurora. And this is all in constructive criticism. I still like the novel but I hope you would spend a little more time on creating a background of world likw what is happening around him, what are his friends and other people feeling around him. So that we can also dive into the world through your novel
A book that might be a bit wonky sometimes, but I will try my level best to improve as it goes on. Hopefully, I will be able to give you something that is worth reading by the end of it.
I really enjoyed this novel out of all of her works. It a cool twist on fantasy hero summoning stories. A must read. This story follows a girl who retuned after killing the demon king alone because she pissed off the goddess that did the hero summoning. She returns to her wold, but there is a slight difference. This world is a modern magic world.
The world description and diversity is good along with the grammar and update stability. But that's it.The Mc is a Fanboy. With a Poor taste of weapon.He preferred fighting fist like a brute and head on instead of fighting smart.He doesn't have a good strategic or analytical mind.I mean seriously daggers are one of his best choices because it mix well with his foundation. But no.He preferred fist fights because it's a "Hassle" to learn Assassin like skills.He doesn't like spoiled brats but himself is far worse.He doesn't deserve the extra powers of the system because.Well surprise surprise its a lotto. And with the power of plot armor he mostly get Rare and Epic level items.And he has the Gall to complain how "Useless" they are.What a hypocrite. I suggest you fixing his attitude because it doesn't match where we came from.The People of IRL are practical and efficient. Not to mention ruthless when it comes to politics and analysis. Unless he's truly a teenager that only watch anime for the rest of his life.Sigh...Such good background and grammar Ruined by a spoiled brat of an Mc. Says mc who is bask by the power of plot armor.
This is a good novel, unfortunately it is one of MAdsnails abandoned (permanent Hiatus) novels that ended in 2012 .-__-........................................
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