Good writing quality, little to no error atleast none that I could make of. The story itself is interesting, it has a lot of potential. The premises it was built on can be considered new and untestesd so its not cliché The characters are midrange in realism, so if author put a lil bit more work in and a good character development, then we'd have a good story in hand.The world background are cloudy tbh, we know it's a cultivation one but unless I was not paying proper attention, it was not explained in details. And that is, more things are still not really explained but that's to be expected since its only just 20 chapters.overall: Its not for me, but if you like kingdom building with cultivation, then go for it