Rebirth of Martial lord of Martial arts - Reviews

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Well, in less words it is great.  Your novel is great, I don't know if u are a man or a woman but yea man it got my blood boil with excitement sometimes while reading . But yea,  you should not make some mistakes with words , nah,forget it . It's not that much of a problem , still I managed to enjoy this novel and it's way better than some of the ones that I've read so far. Update the new chapter quickly bro , I'm waiting eagerly .

I know it’s a bit early on to give a review so I’m giving it a medium review which I hope is ok don’t want to be harsh love seeing fellow new writers but I see myself so much of myself in your writing style and personal wanted to give you something to be able to reflect on and some motivation to write I will read your story and I will be waiting to see if you to continue I have also commented on your chapters as well saying similar things but i wish to repeat in more detail.

Good things
1.You have the idea always important
2.you have ok grammar could use a little improvement but that’s fine we’re not professional writers

Things you could improve
1.Context matters build up a description of your character, new family, new world, compare
2.cultivation isn’t everything as I feel a problem all novels especially young one who set themselves these massive cultivation realms with fancy words is they often have no meaning to a reader there just word so try and help the audience gain insight on what they mean and how strong each realm is don’t go into to much detail
3.personally don’t like first person too much and I think you would find it easier to write in the 3rd (my opinion lol)

Please continue to write I will read!!!
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Checkout blind saint as I’m currently writing it it’s not great but I think you might be good for you to read a style of writing that’s the opposite of your own

you have to update more chapters. Also, work on Joey attitude at least let her interview admit how she feels or I am going to delete your book.

Unfinished

I'm excited! Aeon is not a favorite but with how Cassandra made me fall in love with Riley, I'm looking forward to know more about Aeon!