The pacing in these chapters is absolutely relentless and I couldn't put it down.
Chapter 6 opens with the aftermath of a confrontation—Song Tang has just told Mu Ziyu to leave, and within moments Madam He is bursting in with news that has already spread through the entire courtyard. Qiu Ling, of course. The speed at which information travels in this household is almost comical, but it also creates this suffocating atmosphere where Song Tang can never have a private moment, never even process her anger before everyone is reacting to it.
The chapter then pivots from emotional confrontation to cold negotiation with her father, and the shift is jarring in the best way. One moment she's declaring she won't marry Mu Ziyu, the next she's bargaining for ten thousand taels. This isn't a girl throwing a tantrum—this is a strategist assessing her options. The author doesn't warn us about this shift; we just experience it, and it's brilliant.
Then we cut to Song Wei and Madam He, and the pacing slows just enough for us to absorb the manipulation happening in real time. Song Wei's 'secret rejoicing' while maintaining her expressionless face—that's a detail the author drops quickly but it lands perfectly. We understand immediately that this girl is playing a game too.
Chapter 7 opens with the visit to Marquis Mu, and the tension builds differently here. It's not the frantic energy of the Song household—it's a slow, pressurized conversation where every line of dialogue carries weight. Mu Changxiao's questions about whether she has someone else, his observation of her bruised face, his offer to grant any request—each beat adds a layer. The chapter ends with her leaving with the ointment and heading to Wangyue Lou, where Mu Ziyu has been frequenting. That final destination is a hook that made me immediately want to turn the page.
The structure moves from external conflict (Mu Ziyu, her parents) to internal resolution (her conversation with Marquis Mu) to setup for the next conflict (Wangyue Lou). It's tight, it's efficient, and it never lets the reader breathe for too long.