Rebirth:Love Amidst Vengeance - Reviews

amazing book. very entertaining. please continue

Interesting story. Will read to see where it will go. good work by the author and I'm sorry, I'm sleepy to write a good review. Just don't drop and keep writing.

Garbage. -King Vegeta was scared of baby broly with 10,000 bp and when he finds this mc with 320k bp and he wants to control her? garbage plot. -Then instead of you know using brain and finding a way to stop it, MC screams at Vegeta that mc will kill him. Yeah it seems that a 3 year old attempted to write this fic because ever action that was taken was not even planned out.

Hopefully it gets selected soon, synopsis is intriguing for me at least..??????????????????????????????????

its Ergen, no matter what you say about his novels they are quality novelsnow the most important question is that in the previous stories we have the god, the devil, the demon, the eternal and the immortal I guess u can count the ghost as well but he wasn't an mc what will the mc of this novel become?

Boring. It's just another simulation novel. The twist isn't even a twist at all. Effectively, the MC's name is swapped with someone else in the simulation. Just another power up fic.

So yeah I'm not gonna go into details because someone else already did but I just wanna say that you should really read this book if you're looking for a real sect development story with little to no cliche and above all a slow and steady story instead of a fast paced one where mc becomes op just in 2 chapters. yeah so that was a little long but who cares. continue like this author you're doing a great job.

I like the feel of it, it can become some nice story but one ****** clique can ruin this, since it seems you have taken heavy inspiration from japanese novels beware of being your avarage weeb s h i t. (myclasshasbeentransportedigotnothingimopananyway)The first chapter leaves good impression but for the love of god please simplify your status. I know you are trying to make a good game as well as a good story but enough is enough have a good time writing.                       [Its your novel thanks for reading this.]

Chapter 3 and I can't help but love the story already.Because the author knows something most writers don't.How to give the protagonist goals he wants to achieve and stakes that make it challenging.

System Points: 1000

He looked at the room with such a worried face. "This was her room..." he went to the bed. "I made love to her here...." He bent down and grabbed the frame. "I loved her deeply.." he looked up at me. He had tears running down his face. "Everything was going good until he wanted her." He stood. "And he got her. He turned her against me. He made her think I was bad. But I wasn't. I was heartbroken when I found out she slept with him in the same bed that we made love in...." he kicked the bed. It hit the other side of the wall. I quickly went to him.

"So this warm feeling was your magic..." I muttered. When he heard this, his eyes bulged and he let go of my hand.