Writing Quality: A decent amount of grammar errors but understandable. Story is good enough to overlookStability: Seems fineStory: Very interesting so far and uniqueDesign: Kid is cute and hopefully spelling mc donalds on the first chapter wrong was how the kid pronounced it because it was funny and cuteBackground: not sure yet
The adjective bad meaning “unpleasant, unattractive, unfavorable, spoiled, etc.,” is the usual form to follow such copulative verbs as sound, smell, look, and taste: After the rainstorm the water tasted bad.
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I loved the way author wrote this story especially the narrative style of the characters and their interactions. I haven't read a story which describes culture and traditions, it is evident that author has done a really good job. The writing quality,the plot build up everything about this story is awesome. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep up the good work author.
just read the book that's it trust me u will thank me later....the fl is awesome...she has Brain, is smart ,can fight and still has a beautiful heart . our ml...is strong cold ,powerful . ...but still the most understanding guy out there....
Old Man Long standing while his hand crossed on his back, he stared at the man he found unfamiliar. However, soon a smile appeared on his face since he can see that his granddaughter seems to like this man.