Rebirth Immortal - Reviews

Rather than new crap every week, I'd rather they focused more effort on finishing the stories they've already started. Especially some of the good stories that seem to have been totally dropped, like Dark King, which hasn't had a new chapter in ten months...

I like the idea of which the story is centered upon. Like the characters, too. My biggest problem with the story is that the grammar is horrible. It is very hard to understand in some cases. If the grammar is fixed, the overall story will improve.

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"System? Who the fuck are you?" Jiang Xiuran spat back, he checked every direction but only he was in the immediate vicinity.

"What the fuck was that?"

Aleng pepay:anong nangyari sa kanya xenon?!

Hu Lei's mind drifted back to the activities of the previous night and the early morning. It was almost as if Zhong Feng's warm lips were once again scalding her skin. Her internal temperature seemed to rise a little higher and she blushed.

She wouldn't agree to it, keeping her mouth closed no matter what. I got a little angry, so I suddenly bit down hard on her clit.

Thank you all for reading~!

And all that glitters is gold

I need to get myself away from this place