Rebate System At The End Of World - Reviews

I made it to chapter 17.  Translation quality seems totally fine.  Unfortunately the story itself is so bad that I cannot continue.  Basically the behaviour of the MC doesn't really match what a thousand year old monster would do, even though the author keeps bringing that up.

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Overall, the entire novel is pretty good except for one definite flaw. The MC. He is obnoxiously Naive to the point that I felt like I was having an Aneurysm reading the things he thinks/says. I find myself speaking/talking out loud about how stupid/naive his actions are atleast 1-2 times per chapter.

Really good novel , if you want to read then go for it.Auther really tried his hard to make it good story and there is also constantly story develop.

The concept is good. This story could be great but it's somewhat unreadable. The author keep changing perspective that breaks the immersion. and keep using 1st person and 3rd person. Please choose one and stick with it.

I hope talia dies painfully and is unable to be ressurected and no I will never enjoy her presence. However, everything else about the novel is great.

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Life lessons learnt. Very instructive and educational in piece . I am using the lessons learnt to teach and enlighten my children. Experience they say is the best teacher. If you aren't patient enough you end up on the wrong side of life

Shameless self-review.I do hope everyone can enjoy this novel. Our MC will spend a lot of time on her own exploring and discovering things inside the MAZE. The idea is to mix some regular fantasy troupes with some slice of life, showing how is to actually live as someone who fights monsters and explore different places for a living.

I'm going to give 5 stars for the most part to start with. I hope to see more chapters soon find the book interesting so far, though not a full 5 stars

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