Re: Magic Armor Vawln - Reviews

Well this novel is an interesting read. It is nicely translated though I have come across a number of  issues that I can only put down to laziness in not rechecking the work.Story begins with the author (studying to be a movie director) being expelled from his University on charges of racism. Amusingly the MC is Chinese and the accuser was African-American. Anyhow the charges are false but of course it’s a case of he said, she said and so he is booted. Whilst wallowing in misery he gains the ability to see movies from the future after being hit in the head by a baby stroller. So that’s is his super power, knowing future movies and being able to plagiarise them. No system, no special powers.The book itself reads well and has a nice story but that is it. I have nothing else to praise it over. The narrative is smooth but there is no grab to it. How many times can the MC direct a movie, produce a movie, invest in XYZ affiliated movie industry? I read up to about chapter 150 and even though I did enjoy reading the story, there was nothing to keep me invested in this. I appreciate the effort the author took to try and keep accuracy in his story however it again it felt like rinse and repeat of previous achievements.I really wanted to be invested in this and did give it a decent go, but it wasn’t to be. The author has decent skills so maybe he could have done this in another manner to keep readers involved. I did note some comments were 4 years old with only 251 chapters released. I suspect this was a trial read that never made the cut back then and WebNovel has pulled it out of the cupboard to see if it can make them some money.Overall it felt good but sadly I had to give up.

It is a pity, that this book was not trasnslated. This is one of the most unique story in this site. Abd tge mtl is practically unreadable. n

The translation and writing of this book in English make it practically unreadable, it would likely be good with proof reading and better translation. Now though it isn't good in my opinion.

Omg I love ? this book sooooo muchI'm still reading it and so far I'm more and more impressed by the author ?......Honestly speaking,I love the creativity and diversity of the story and plot....✨?✨It's refreshing to read this masterpiece....Keep it up my boi??

Interesting story! I like how you put it into detail and give me an image of what's the world MC has in the story.I hope the author won't drop it and continue updating the story.

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This is review after 167 chapters...I think I've written pretty good story considering it was my first time.?(Of course, there are many other authors who have written countless times better than I did)However, This story also has MANY flaws such as some grammatical mistakes and some inconsistency in story. If you read the story, you are welcome to criticize it and I'll try to correct and improve based on your suggestions if I find them good. ***However, there are some things which you won't like but it doesn't mean that it's sh** so don't try to judge it and read if you like if not no one gonna force you to read.Happy reading~

"Yeah," I said.

This phenomenon was remembered by many and gave hope to the people as they saw the golden light emitted by Anima flowing on the sky that came from different places, towards the middlemost and highest point of the Aedon Citadel — Levatio Tower where the Radiant Diamond could be found.

Mustering his last bit of strength, he asked his killer a deeply needed question, "Who are you?". The boy bent down and closed his fingers around the dagger's hilt. Looking into the man's eyes, he spoke four words: "My name is Alpha" and then pulled the dagger out of the man's head. Matthew's head lulled to the side as the light of life left his eyes.

Pertamax ??? Thanks for the Books!!!!! ? ??Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book ????? We are all looking forward for the next chapters ???