Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel - Reviews

Personally the novel is too slow for me 100 chapters in and he isn’t a villian or done anything to make him a villian I know we will probs be evil in the future but it takes too long for him to get to that stage unfortunately.
Good novel tho if u like slow paced novels

A nice novel sadly the mc progress is too slow I decided to continue till 100+ chapters hoping there would be some change but he barely gained anything . I stopped at chapter 114. not a bad novel but am not a fan of slow progress.

I was promised a story about a villain. Almost 90 chapters in and the hero has done nothing even remotely evil or villainous except kill a mouse. Waste of time to read.

Plot holes. Confusing backstory with things unexplained. Writing feels like it lacks planning. Mc makes poor choice in particular in how he spends his points and overall interacts with the system. Terrible name choices. And strange behavior from other characters that doesn't make much sense.

Mr. Author  It takes 1k points to Heal his Dantian. But 1 million to heal his arms. What im saying is that Doesn't make sense. I've read hundreds of Cultivation Novels but Never, And I Mean NEVER!!! was it harder to fix the ARMS than the DANTIAN . Normally it only takes a Great quality Healing pills to heal physical injury from poison wounds or CURSES But if you damage Your SOUL, DANTIAN, OR SPIRIT it will take IMMORTAL HEAVEN BENDING GODLY MIRACULOUS PILL or ELIXIR to heal the dantian, soul or spirit But in this novel healing the soul dantian or spirit is 1000× times easier than healing a Arm Injury. This is the first time I've encountered such setting But you're the author after all you decide how the world common sense , reason or logic. Is there actually any reason about this ridiculous event?

before I keep reading
did he kill his 5 year old sister

Nice novel, heavily underrated tho
Keep it up bro and don’ give up on writing you have quality and plot and so far there’s been no cliches or romance so I’m all in support of the novel

Good novel so far. I hope the author does not change his line of reasoning during the course of the novel. In addition, for those who like a villain novel and an MC in this style, it is a great choice.

The cover is from "My three beautiful wives"

Dude, I've come this far, but you have to explain some things now. First of all, in what kind of novel is he reincarnated as a hero? Why does he know the story down to the last detail and forget about this seer? And what's with the hero who dies at the end!?!? This story (the one Mc read) is not good at all. The fact that he remembers everything might be due to his memory ability in the shop but that's another problem! You have not introduced this system very well. For example, what do the luck stat do? Is he really a lucky person right now? What is the limit of the abilities in the shop? And why doesn't it show up in the system? For example, he bought a training room or something. If I hadn't looked at past chapters, I would have almost forgotten about it.

And most importantly, when did he get to the point of doing so many experiments with plants and beasts? I've never seen anyone become so knowledgeable by reading a fantasy book. I'd rather he tried to learn something.

I mean, if you look at him, he has a system. He knows the plot down to the last detail. He knows the whole plot and he still fails miserably. Man, if any other Xianxia MC had some of his skills, he'd be Op in 50 chapters. But he suffers so much because of fate and that b♡♡h called seer.

I'm not saying the story is bad, but it's always frustrating. And yes, I hope  he tortue that s♡♡t stalker seer in the future.

Firstly, I Just want to say that this is a cultivation novel, so the bar is already low.
Here is my review:
Not bad but it doesnt lives up to hype. Mc survives a lot of near death experiences using his system. But that would mean he was going to die without the system and his prior knowledge. Then how did the Main character in his book survive? We are told that he is reincarnated in his own book yet he just has some general knowledge and thats about it. If this was a normal 'reborn in past' story, it would be exacly same. He acts like this isnt even his own book. He literaly has too many ways to escape the bad events yet he doesnt.

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