Re: Hell. Finding the way up. - Reviews

Re: Hell. Finding the way up.
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I dropped it in chapter 134, so the review is obviously up there.The characters and the story are clichéd and without depth, but it's something common in this type of literature (a drunk who sells the castle's lighting to buy booze completely changes his personality and vices and nobody thinks it's strange? The goddess of alchemy working as a maid for two years for someone she hates and despite the powerful father, he sends a bodyguard who at the time was weak to protect someone that any nation would do anything to get their hands? Yes, sure...).But here the lack of human reactions/emotions from the MC and other characters makes the history worse... and to make it even worse the MC just reacts to what happens around him and has no goals...Does he want to expand his empire? No, he just react to aggression (which usually doesn't make sense) to counterattack and conquer territories.Does he want to gather his brides? No, on the contrary, they are the ones who, thanks to the plot, go after him.Do you want to get or beat the parents who abandoned the MC? No.The only thing he does is follow the system blindly, without the ability to make decisions of his own.Another point is his lack of character or humanity... Basically in chapter 133 he killed millions of innocents (whether men, women, children, babies, passing travelers, merchants...) for something he saw in a dream?! And immediately after that he makes a joke using hid intellectual level equivalent to a 5 year old child with the "bride" he called but forgot because he was busy doing genocide. The author must have put this in as comic relief, but it's so stupid it's pathetic instead of funny...I had already seriously thought about dropping it when, a few chapters before, the MC in 2 minutes of conversation decided to kill all the officers of a guild (at the time he killed the two leaders) of merchants and stole all their goods, because they had more soldiers than allowed and have been disrespectful and arrogant, and to make matters worse the other merchants of the nation are worried but then they are calm when the king "explains" why he did it, without presenting proof or without making a judgment... who would entrust their money and your life to such a king and government as this? Not even in the Middle Ages would kings do something so stupid. I had hope that the story would get better, but everything (both the story and the intelligence of the characters) got even worse.
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First 60 chapters are a treat,the free ones,are nice to read. After that, the quality drop to google translate level, mc name change, capitalization and punctuation are optional, just spend your coins or fast pass somewhere else. (stopped reading at chapter 86)
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Thank you for reading!As of writing this note, I've been writing on this story every day for nearly three months. My head is full of little dragon thoughts. I am so honored to have been gifted so many small stones of power to hoard. (Keeping daily screenshots ❤️)And to each of you who have added it to your library, many thanks!! When I'm running low on energy I think, but I have X many readers for whom I must finish the tale properly! And this number has continued  to slowly grow! *thrilled*Eventually I hope to convey the development of adventure, friendship, romance, and artificial intelligence before this story ends.Some of the questions that resulted in my story outline:Being a person doesn't require that you have all your limbs does it? It isn't based on your occupation is it? What color your skin is? Your wings or claws? And is it kidnapping if an AI is stolen?This tale is a descendant of Kiri to Shinkirō, which I began posting here as well a few weeks after beginning this story.
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This a new kind of a good novel description and hope the same goes for the novel:dialogue:From the future daughter :  Hi daddy I am your daughter from the futureThe father: I am rich in the futureFrom the future daughter : Mom is rich but you're a house keeperThe father: The number you have dialed cannot work
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i love/like this novel please keep updating i love/like this novel please keep updating
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The book has a nice start to it, it is easy to understand since the writer gives an explanation of everything. The characters and plot are well done. I recommend it to anyone who like a good novel from weak to strong.
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plz make more chapters plz but no locks plz. hxludjfigotoglfi kfogkgkgitogifitigugiy8t9yououpupu9y8y7t8tiyoy8tigogigigut7tigigigiyiaprofororprpriridugr7rufigogpgofofifkfi
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I agreed with him, although my Ranger skill would alert us of enemies but if we have nowhere to hide it would be of no use.
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Everyone forgot at that moment that there was still one more person in line, and Teo was too shy to yell out, thus, the emissary left, with Flare and Joe. At that point, Teo decided to chase after the emissary. The emissary turned to leave, the two boys looked at their home, inwardly laughing at their old friends, suddenly, Teo ran at them.
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I just felt like punching him, I mean I have been telling him this, like FOREVER!!, thank goddess I held my self, back there.

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