Overall the story is great i like the concept of the story its just in video games genre "Little Sister" is so overused i get it you know its just that its too cringe xD iam not here to criticize just wanted to review xD
ohhh god here we go again another i see hint theme novel pls stop, if 1 new novel theme got chosen it immediately copy itself become more it's going to get boring, just like pet novel
Chloe collapsed to the ground her mouth frothing as a guttural sound came from somewhere deep inside her. From a few desks down, a lanky girl staggered towards us, her steps shifting from a shamble to a walk as she closed in on us.
At my apartment Saber comes and greets me as usual. He can't make any noise or anything since he is but a shadow still it is comforting to watch him come to the door excitedly whenever I come back. I set mako down. She immediately goes and studies Saber. She seemed very interested in Saber and Saber seemed to have interest in her since they were running around playing tag in the living room.