RavenHolts enternal forge - Reviews

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The only issues I have with this story are the lack of much background (could be cleared later might be due to small tribe in the boonies) a few misspelled or misused words (very few- only remember4 at ch. 80) and the slow release rate (because I love it so much I want more to read)

A very promising book that unfortunately suffered from a lack of care from the author : update stability so far under the ground that it touched Earth core … Consider yourself lucky if you got 1 chapter a month.Conclusion : not worth it until Author can keep a regular schedule

Wah Someone gonna have a baaaaad tooom! So idia is nice mc can go to other worlds and annoy someone who try to kill him -!!€&@+@(×#1881211  140 charcacters...?

ok, honest review: it's a good read, the MC is not the naive type, dumb and with a sense of heroics, he already lived a life where he saw the evils of the world so we are not going to worry mostly about character development, he has a logical golden finger although there are many mysteries but not very important for now but uncomfortable .in conclusion it is a good recommended reading with its parts of lemons, I hope it continues to rise more.

5 star for a female main character story. But this seems abit too vengeful for a female character. Oh well, the saying goes, nothing is more poisonous than a women's heart......women are scary creatures after all xDD

"Take your places at the end on the line." I say in an authoritative manner.

In another place, Lu Zhou was drinking wine while playing chess with Mu Chen. They were great friends from the times they were students in the sect.

The next day, Taerone hurriedly went to her house and knock on the door. However no one answer his calls.

I looked over body, and tried to determine if she had been violated, I was unsure how I would feel about inhabiting a body that had been raped, since I had always died before I turned thirteen years old, I personally had no experience with the sexual side of life, although I had witnessed young girls raped and tortured during my many lifetimes.

It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

Only shooting stars