Raven: Rise of the demon god - Reviews

How is there only 5 votes                                                                              

I really like this story, the characters and particularly the relationship between everyone but I wonder if you decide to stop indefinitely your story ?

Review up to ch57The world building is pretty good and there are plenty of unique things but it's rather inconsistent and the author didn't simply use a ton of references from the real world, he straight up named almost everything after existing stuff, be it names, brands or even specific things from animes and games. The MC seems to utilize his knowledge from his past life quite well but at the same time he got a lot of stuff handed to him on a silver plate just cause the author said so through completely unnatural situations (though there were hints that such occurrences might have a reason not disclosed up to the chapter I read).I like antihero MCs but decided to drop this one after he straight up manipulated his past life girlfriend into liking him again as if he hadn't screwed up before, without even taking his time to try and get her to know him again to see if things would end up well, he just kissed her out of nowhere which shows he has no morals, he just does whatever the f he wants and does not abide by any rule (which is also noticeable from other situations, not just the girlfriend part, as he constantly changes his mind about everything).It might be good for you if you like MCs like that but it's a no no for me.

Amazing book the story writing is awesome and the whole plot is very good and the perfect I had a worried I prefer you to read new writer is on the way he might be the best

more chap please                                                                                                                           

Good Book. Some inconsistencies and forced narrative shifts but overall much better than generic cultivation novels. Has a strong female character in the initial chapters, no flowery Jade skin descriptions. Light novel done right.

nice description. i am expecting more from you. if you want to take a break .be sure to tell us. atleast we won't be bored waiting for new chapter

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let's get a general overview. the story is set in a futuristic world with flying cars, robots, and advanced technology. in this world, everyone has a brain crystal that gives them superpowers.our young protagonist, Erik is a bullied student with an F rank power who discovers a system that turns his life around.the world building is intricate to say the least. Pilgrim doesn't spare any effort when It comes to descriptions and paints a vivid image of the background in your head. his words flow together beautifully.the story starts out nice and slow, it doesn't rush the reader nor is it stressful on them. not much can be said about it as of now, it's still a bit early, but there are some rather exciting upcoming arcs which I'm looking forward to.updating stability is excellent too, a solid two chapters everyday.i would say Pilgrim's writing style could use a bit of work though, so could his character design. we'll certainly see improvements in the future.all in all a 10/10 for system lovers, if you're not reading, then i don't know what you're doing :3

Saji was a bit captivated by them much to Ruruko and Momo annoyance. They both pinched his waist and that made Saji flinched with confusion.

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