I like the way you write it. I like its because its written in POV. I kind of like Rafe, a cool character for me in this Rafael Sinclair's Revenge book. It's nice :)) Keep writing
I really liked the story and the author writing capability are great. The gap between the narrative and conversation make readers understand easly. Both character and the conflicts are clear as far as I read. Cool! Good job author! ✨
