Pyhy) Chaos and God - Reviews

This is my first review.OK where do I start from...... hmmmm.Alright, first the editing quality of this novel is crap. Like seriously crappy. It kills the flow of the book I can barely read one paragraph without having to either take a break or roll my eyes. It's that bad. I mean if it's a middle schooled who is writing this then it's understandable. I'm already complaining so much but I'm just on the third chapter at this point.I like the the fact that a whole new type of system is introduced here. I mean a system that gives you quests based on your original occupation is not something I've seen before. Most systems just force you to do stuff. Well if you've seen similar systems to this just outside name of the novel under replies. That aside, I find the system really childish and cringy. There is barely any world background and the plot just seems forced. Well this is just my opinion after reading three chapters. Hopefully it gets better. The update frequent is probably one of the few good points about this novel though.

20 ch in and no kingdom building has occurred. High quality writing but a misleading title. If you want a story with intrigue and a dark setting, then this is for you. If you want the challenges of governance, setting up a kingdom, leading armies, etc. I have no clue when it will start given the stories pacing.

Such an amazing series. I couldn't stop reading. Some stories when finished, theres an emptiness, like a part of you died. This is not the case with this series, I feel the ending felt more like closure with an old friend.

I've never heard about the background story before. Nevertheless, your guys captivated me! Keep it up - really want to see more! Better be fast!

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"What? Insects? Like big insects or small insects?"

"To prevent yourself getting more accidents, please refrain from going anywhere suspicious." Hongqi loudly reminded Xiulan while he was inside the walk-in closet.

Seeing his enemy charging in front of him, a cold smile appear in Meng Shui's face. His eyes glint with killing intent as a sword suddenly appeared in his hands.

["We're here, tell where you can feel the connection is coming from, I'll get you closer to what you're connecting to."] Luna nods and closes her eyes, trying to feel the mysterious connecting she has.

I fell on the ground and rubbed my head. I stared in shock as I looked to see what thing I bumped into when it was a tall, very, very tall man. He stared at me with cold eyes, that soon filled with warmth as he bent down and picked me up. I didn't know what to do. This old man was so tall, at least ten feet, and towered over me like a giant. I was like a child when he picked me up.

Nah, cara yang lebih halus adalah dengan mengatakan bahwa dia membelai kepalanya, tetapi intinya masih berdiri!Tepukan kepala adalah prioritas!

"he he he, he looking at sister breast with pervert eyes this morning.... aaaaaaauch"