It was interesting. But it becomes repetitive with the mc coincidentally meeting a friendly ghost, kills a villain and expanding his shop to scare people. After the 9x times there is nothing In the mc life excepting getting more ghosts. He doesn't even have a full sleep in months.You will know almost nothing about the mc world. Everything introduced are either victims and the world mc live in looks like 90% ghosts looking for you and the 10% just don't give a damn. His city alone has so many deaths with serial killers everywhere. Who in the right mind would go to mc horror house when you see deaths everywhere everyday?
You limit the abilities of the mc. Like wtf, why did you even do that?? He is ridiculously strong but you slowed down his growth in game by 90%. You didn't even spare his experience acquisition. You made one of the richest person on the planet mc's slave but you can't even make the mc ride a care to school?? Creativeness man. Do you know that word? Be creative but don't exaggerate it.Dropping it.
aya i need to call my fish headed friend. SRYSLY AUTHOR I WANNA LOCK YOU UP AND FORCE YOU TO WRITE TILL YOU WITHER..........................................................................................................................
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