Proto-Esper - Reviews

Wow just wow... I tried...  that's all I can say.... I don't understand one thing about this.... it's not the translation. Translation seems good it's the development of the story... who is she? Did she die? ... when did she fall asleep?  What is she doing? Now normally this would interest me to continue reading... but my goodness this ? is exhausting to read...lol

I almost didn't start reading this novel because of all the negative comments about the quality of the translations. I'm glad I started though. In my opinion there are some spelling errors, typing errors and grammar mistakes at times but it's nowhere as bad as all the comments indicate. Well, let me put it this way: the quality of translation absolutely does NOT affect my joy of reading, I get so engaged in the story that I don't even make note of the mistakes oftentimes. I don't know if the earlier chapters later on had been fixed and updated but what I can tell you now, that if you are interested in the plot, go ahead and read it, it is really a good read. So, thank you translators for your hard work. Also, please increase chapter upload per week, because I'm about to catch up and worried that because of the long wait, I'll loose interest in this novel in future, like so it happened with a few others.

Never thought I would read a story that uses lewdness to get stronger but it was still a good read nonetheless, would definitely recommend to read it, as its worth your time.

Bolcurut here, desu.  This is the novel that I have promised;  to replace the novel Enter of Adventure.  However, unlike the novel Enter of Adventure, which is a VRMMOPRG game, this novel is a MOBA-type game played on smartphones.  I have made this novel well and correctly so that you are comfortable reading it.  Very different from the novel Enter of Adventure which has many errors.  And I hope you like this novel.  That's all from me, thank you very much for taking the time to read this novel.

This story is: Rebirth of the Godly Prodigal v2 Sometimes unlucky editionBasically, similar trash plot, trashy luck, cliche becoming lucky, trashy parentsIn another world(not isekai but parallel), there are no good movies, novels, manga, comics, anime. Mc, with the knowledge of the original world, publishes those by writing his name on it. Get praises, money, and girls. It would be a different issue if it was good as IRAS. I like to request Webnovel not to publish this kind of novel.Next Read: Notebook of Fortune

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The usual, 3* for World Building and Update Stability since it's new. To sum it up, it's Supernatural + Gantz = this novel; certain people becomes players in a Supernatural type setting. The concept is very intriguing if you're into the horror type genre that dabbles into mmorpg game mechanics.  The MC, in my opinion, is someone you either love or hate. I'll give you 4 examples of what kind of character he is; Dr. House, Everett Backstrom, and Sherlock from both versions which are BBC's Sherlock and Elementary. A very intelligent a*shole. In the beginning I was put off because of the MC's character. If you can grind and get past that and somehow reach the end (which is currently chapter 60), then the story seriously opens up. Granted his attitude still ticks me off, but the story is good enough to maybe carry the entire novel, maybe. The story is about an event that happens on Earth which allows certain people to become players in a game that involves ghosts, mysticism, the undead and other supernatural phenomenon. So far, the goal is to find, accept and complete missions that deals with the unknown, level up and repeat the process.No spoilers so the only thing I can say is that there is a twist. Verdict: 50/50 depending on your mood and preference.

I give one big, fat stamp of approval to thee, sir! Very much a treat to read, due in no small part to your excellent writing skills, and I DO so love a wild, bonkers concept for a story such as this. Keep it up!

Great Novel ?? don't stop writing it. I personally think this novel has potential to be one of the best ones's out there .

I would say it's a fun read but that's about it There is almost no such thing as a balance of power.mc has a god-like ability in the beginning and it's so pointless.I can't even understand what it has to fight against in the future when mv has such an advantage.Even in my dreams, I wouldn't find such an extreme corrupt talent start plausible.Unfortunately, there is nothing to look at from an objective point of view.

"Biasalah ton, mau minta jatah sama pacar ku" kataku sambil berjalan menuju pos.

When I pulled apart, we were both pretty red. Holding it out to him, I asked shyly, "Do . . . you think you can put it on for me? Please"