Project Overworld - Reviews

Hello, Author of Project Overworld here!

Just to let you all know that this story is currently indefinitely paused (I got myself a job and I'm only doing some writing in my free time now).

I haven't brought myself to set the state of this story into "Completed" yet since I feel like the ending is a bit rushed and there are some ideas worth investigating for a potential sequel.

In any case, I had a wonderful time writing and releasing this novel on this website, so much so that writing became one of my favorite hobbies out there.
I hope you all will enjoy reading Project Overworld if you are new to it, or other wonderful stories if you've already reached the ending point of my novel!

I’m honestly so surprised o didn’t know this gem of a book existed until today. It’s literally everything I’m looking for and more and I’m so exited to see how the mc is going to develop. Thank you so much author for blessing us with such a great novel :)

I'm just gonna lay this out here. The MC goes from making flint spears to black powder rifles in hours. Then becomes a slave. Then leaves. Then goes back to help the people that enslaved him. Seriously. Its like the author added every damn random thought he had to the story. He's inventing rockets and, I **** you not, takes a boat half way around the planet to introduce fucking paintball to the virtual worlds version of a tech fair. This is a guy who's apparently invented A.I. in the game world by the way.

I'm so done with this **** show mash up of a story.

So far this books is of amazing quality. it's  interesting and unique in a way, while keeping your attention with every passing chapter. overall it is one of the few books worth a second read or maybe even a third when it gets higher in chapters which is it's only weak point, the update schedule is a little slow. This is of course counteracted by the great chapters with great length, but overall its current read time is less than 2 hours. still good one, author 10/10

It's a good book

A decent book, but with somewhat iffy uploading schedule. Its hard to find good novels on this site and this is one of them, with decent enough of a plot, realistic ish development, and somewhat far reaching actions this book if it had more support and chapters, is a wonderfull addition to my digital library.

This novel is a hidden gem. Im totally hyped up now xD Dont really know what to write here, just read the first 40 chapters and decide for yourself xD

This was a great idea for a story just badly implemented, there is hardly any good buildup in background or character growth feels kinda boring with no background, nothing done outside of the game in "RL".
The Game doesn't really have any game elements as far as ive read.

The Mc just finds everything and suddenly creates things out of nowhere.
It's kinda like Mc is a wannabe Dr.Stone or whatever.
overall  it's just meh.

Nonsensical "realistic" crafting where one guy can make few guns and cannons in few days without any experience. Good idea for a story, terrible execution.

The idea behind this story is good and I'm of the opinion that if the author keeps with the story to completion then they will have a fantastic first draft.

That said the author tells the readers what's happening rather showing. This doesn't allow the reader to deeply immerse themselves in the story. I think this also contributes to the pacing problems of the story.

Over all if you don't mind that this is a fledgling author then I believe this to be a promising story and hope the author will continue writing it.

Love it pls continue and have motivation to write more quickly thx for the entertainment thx

HOLY CR*P, this is F*cking realistic noise bro but althougth im still at chap 2 it's really nice and realistic gotta make sure you did your reaserch too bro good luck too!