This is actually a nice gamer story, one of the points is that [gamer body] and [gamer mind] weren't nerfed, they where removed so there could actually be some kind of struggle. Anyway onto the review.
1-Writing Quality: The quality is good and there's some grammar stuff happening but too few to notice outright, it's has a pleasant writing. I'd give full mark if some of the chapters didn't feel short and others got long because of times, yes it's flavor but if you skip it it becomes short again.
[4 Stars Here]
2-Story Development: We'll this one is kind of a 50/50 right now, I guess I could consider the MC spontaneous, yes he does have plans but he gets side tracked sometimes(happens often) but it doesn't change the flow of the story it just leaves more questions and build up on pause(body snatcher self-made quest).
[3 Stars Here]
3-Character Design: The characters are well made, even some minor role characters like OG body's mom. Although the MC does act his physical age (He acts grown up for his age but also acts not so grown up most times) so there's that, I don't really have complaints here besides a few minimal things.
[4 Stars Here]
4-Updating Stability: What is stability? From the history we can see that also month updates where happening but now? yeah that's not happening.
[3 Stars]
5-World Background: The world is detailed and has some level of information regarding the scenes and those around it, we get a mild view of where the MC lives in early chapters overall it's good.
[4 Stars Here]
Opinion: The book is definitely a must read, for me as in the good must read but to some it might be a must read to know what not to read
