Primordial Vampire God System - Reviews

Gotta say I really enjoy the novel so far! I think it has lots of potential especially if the author keeps up and gets a more regular release schedule. I think if this novel breaks 300 chapters more people will be flocking to support it.

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Yeah

You are my fire
The one desire
Believe when I say
I want it that way

But we are two worlds apart
Can't reach to your heart
When you say
That I want it that way

Tell me why
Ain't nothin' but a heartache
Tell me why
Ain't nothin' but a mistake
Tell me why
I never wanna hear you say
I want it that way

Am I your fire?
Your one desire
Yes, I know it's too late
But I want it that way

Tell me why
Ain't nothin' but a heartache
Tell me why
Ain't nothin' but a mistake
Tell me why
I never wanna hear you say
I want it that way

Now I can see that we've fallen apart
From the way that it used to be, yeah
No matter the distance
I want you to know
That deep down inside of me

You are my fire
The one desire
You are (you are, you are, you are)

Don't wanna hear you say
Ain't nothin' but a heartache
Ain't nothin' but a mistake (don't wanna hear you say)
I never wanna hear you say (oh, yeah)
I want it that way

Tell me why
Ain't nothin' but a heartache
Tell me why
Ain't nothing but a mistake
Tell me why
I never want to hear you say (never wanna hear you say)
I want it that way

Tell me why
Ain't nothin' but a heartache
Ain't nothin' but a mistake
Tell me why
I never want to hear you say (don't want to hear you say)
I want it that way

'Cause I want it that way

finally! a book with war setting that won't get wishy washed by morals like I won't kill innocents!!
or a book about a non human MC but still cares for the other race!! like a demon king yet still saves human!! CHOOSE YOUR OWN RACE FOR MY SANITY'S SAKE! I HOPE THIS CONTINUES!! I LOVE THE STORY SO FAR!

I have enjoyed the novel so far. The mc was really annoying for the first few chapters but his character has improved over the course of the novel. I wish that more than one chapter was released a day as the chapters feel too short. Highly recommend reading it.

Felt important so i think i should talk about this.
i know how important the mc of the story can be, some people do not like Azriel, so here are his character traits.
-he kills innocents.
-he is naive and reckless.
-he likes to fight and get stronger.
-he does not like to read.

of course, it will change in the future, he will be the one who leads the empire, a leader can't be a Brute who doesn't think anything.
He will change and get better.
Actually, he is already a lot better than before within 30ish chapters and will keep on improving as the story progress.
please be patient with him and me.


hmm hmm, that's all i wanted to say.
I hope have a great time reading.

THIS IS GOOD...........................................................................................................
I WANT VIOLENCE.............................................

Hey

[Final Score] ⭐⭐⭐⭐

[Writing  Quality] ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Pretty good, a few typos here and there but they aren't common.

[Stability of Updates]   ⭐⭐⭐
The author can miss a day or two but the usual upload schedule is once a day

[Story Development] ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
It's a pretty good novel I must say. The main character starts off as irritating and does dumb mistakes but he learns from them and doesn't repeat them. I really liked the idea of vampires who were at the top of the chain, feared by all turning into an oppressed race and slowly but surely starting to stand for themselves to overpower every opposer and stand proud as the strongest and feared race

[Character Design] ⭐⭐⭐
The character designs are not bad, they're what you expect of a vampire novel.

[World Background] ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Absolutely love the lore behind the world and I hope we'll get more info on different countries, kingdoms, religions, etc.

So yes, of course, I am going to give my book a 5 stars. That is like a rule.
...
Okay, so let me be clear.
This book is not an sm*t book like my other book, it has a more serious plot.
So of course, since I want character development as well, my mc will not be a perfect one.
Remember, we have read tons of novels, he has not.
So don't expect him to be very smart.
However, he will have people supporting him from behind who will ensure that he doesn't make bad decisions, but you will have to wait for them to appear.
...
Warning: this is a revenge novel, so there will be lots of killing. Mc will even kill innocents without a shred of mercy.
There will be gore.
So read if you are comfortable with that stuff.
Thank you~~
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Now with that done, I welcome you for the ride~~

i generly dont review this early, but from the authors other work, and the start of this one, i can say its gonna be really good and special.  its an intresting take on vamp stories, give it a try.

Unlike your first book this mc is really not great.

Naive
Stupid
prideful

The story is interesting but very slow.

The pov change so early in the story to show other characters is very bad in my opinion because I think side characters and mobs shouldn’t get so much screen time.

The whole nationalsm like fanatics of the vampire race is also very annoying and I feel good that they lost because of how they act.

Hello,
this is my first ever review (on a book and in English) so please ignore any errors I might make.
First of all, I’d like to address how well the author describes the world, its people and their actions, which makes it easy for the reader to create a picture in their mind and follow along.
It’s quite impressive how well and plausible some of the characters, their actions and their changes are explained and portrayed. There are rarely questions left as to why or how a they do something or how they changed to what they are now.
The story progresses very smoothly while not being too slow nor too fast and always explaining enough but not going to much into detail, which makes this book quite fun to read.
Sometimes, there are smaller spelling or grammatical errors but they don’t influence the overall quality of the work.

Thank you dear author for sharing this amazing story, I enjoyed reading it so far (chapter 45). Please keep up the awesome work. [img=recommend]