Primordial 'Dual Cultivator' Dragon With System - Reviews

Cultivation novels are the only thing I can handle, let's just see what this one about...

Part 1:

I was contemplating on whether I should write a review for this novel or not, but in the end I decided to do it, so here goes nothing.

First things first, this book was absolute garbage up until the 300th chapter or so and I will tell you why. The progression in cultivation levels that the mc went through was absolutely meaningless since he never fought against anyone, for one simple reason: Ling Xi (the higher realm person who gives him his powers at the start).

*There's an enemy approaching that could possibly make the story interesting by introducing real stakes or anything to change up the monotony of the chapters*

MC: ling Xi, suppress this guy for me while I talk to him as if I was the one who had defeated him.
Ling Xi: Okay.

This was legit how the first 300 chapters went with almost no change to the flow of the story the book was taking, what with the s*x scenes and the pure stupidity of the MC and how he deals with different situations.

Part 4:

The way the author portrays the marriages that connect the bigshots of each clan together is honestly some of the most novel and intriguing portrayals I've read in a while. The plot also starts thickening (past the 300s anyway) and the world building becomes more fleshed out. Basically what I'm trying to say is that the only reason this book is getting trash reviews is because of the first 300 chapters or so. In fact, if you were to take the latter 600 chapters (as of writing this review, there's 937 chapters) as a stand-alone LN, then you will get yourself an average cultivation book with interesting prospects that could easily bag a rating of 4/5.

But alas, due to it having had an absolutely horrendous start, plus the fact that the grammar is sort of subpar especially with the author often mixing up his pronouns, this book will have to settle for a rating of 3.5/5 or 7/10 at most.

Thanks my friend for novel recommendation

I advise you to not read this sh*t if you like cultivation novels

Shameless author here. Dual cultivation? Big harem? Gentle but cruel? System? Illicit relationships? This novel contains everything, please take a peek, and I hope you all enjoy this story.

PS - MC is a male prostitute, so if you guys don't like MC sleeping with married women (Some people consider it as sharing partners, NTR, blah blah), then you guys don't need to read this novel.

Since many people have asked whether Ling Yun's customers are still having intimate with their husbands or not, I will answer it here, and I hope no one will ask about this matter again.

Before the story started, Ling Yun had ten customers, but I didn't write about their relationship with their husbands in detail except for one woman.

However, there was no intimate action between them, for her husband was a cripple.

Five of his customers were already divorced when they met Ling Yun again, and they had no relationship with other men.

Three of his customers are also still married, but there is no intimate scene between them.

As for the last customer, I won't say anything now. Up to the latest chapter, Ling Yun hasn't met her again, but I already have a plan for her.

Another shameless review from me as the author! For those of you who ask about Yuri, I will just say that there is no relationship between women behind the MC, and such activities only occur when they are with the MC. So it's up to you guys whether you can accept it or not, and I never force everyone to like my novels.

Please maintain the pace well, and don't rush to add more women in short time. It's kinda annoying if you add too many women in short time.

great novel before but even better with the rewrite. the novel has everything you need to keep you entertained and enjoy reading it. the rewrite has added more character growth and communication between him and women over the previous version. keep up the great work brother on this. the original was what turned me on to your works. thanks so much for the hard effort you put in to your writing. looking forward to more.

I made it to chapter 380, but for me I just can't continue.  The writing is good, but someone early complained about author using names instead of pronouns, and they obliged.  However author should have kept with names as the use of pronouns is wrong about 95% of the time.
The MC is ok and is essentially along for the ride as all the girls around him are like that Noob in a MMORPG who accidentally pulls the boss when your trying clear the room every raid/dungeon. The girls bring all the trouble to the MC and so far pretty much the MC is not strong enough to take them on and has to be protected.. But then the women tell him he needs to get stronger (the ones targeting are 3-5 realms!! higher than him).   Liang Xi is the worst of the bunch as she always complains about him needing focus on cultivation and getting stronger, but is also the one throwing all these troublesome women at him like she is feeding the birds.. This is on story I actually sympathize with the MC as every one around him just makes his life a CLUSTER $*@)!...He can't cultivate for more than a couple hours as he is either Banging all these women or is in a situation out of his control..   I could continue if the MC would just finally snap at Liang Xi with the cold hard truth from above.. But unfortunately we get "I need to get stronger.", "you need to be serious and get stronger." every other chapter.

i liked your old story alot before this rewrite and was quite confused why but reading this one i like this one alot more than the last one the only reason its a 4.8 is because of the mc's father and all the other retards like them in the story who annoy me that being said the villains and antagonist did their purpose to make the readers dislike them but every one has different opinions so its at 4.8

So far the plot and pace are pretty good, I hope the story isn't rushed like in the old novel. If possible, make the MC's relationship with the current woman deeper first, before bringing up a new harem member.