Hello, Author here, it's been a couple of days since we started this journey and honestly I'm happy with how things are going. The story so far is progressing at a steady pace so just sitback and enjoy.
I was fascinated in this story at first (another platform) then so many characters were introduced… mostly insignificant… can hardly remember who’s who… chapters were shorter… so i abandoned the ship ...
Finally some of Lily's deeds get found out. Do they all know about their fake engagement? I can't stand how nice O'dell is to Lily and by that, I mean he never goes after her. He could at least threaten her and make her scared instead of ignoring her.
