Priest : Rise of Project Nyx - Reviews

This novel had a great potential but author destroyed it by his own hands. This is typically a Skyrim a Skyrim fanfic. Zero realism and world building (initially there was some, but author wanted to ruin it so badly). *spoiler* After tutorial arc since there are no deaths, people can revive unlimited times, there is literally no thrill at all. Author does not have any idea where to lead the story. whimsical writing.   MC literally does not have any advantage for having dual. Instead he is weak, gets overpowered by enemies time to time. Even other players who don't have any advantage technically, can easily give MC hardtime for his life. This story was not meant to be written by this author is all I can say. Totally wasted potential.

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Quite frankly, this one has a lot of wasted potentialThere's a lot to improve authorThe grammer is just something enough to be rated as readable, not something I'd prefer, but still read itStory development is quite slow, though that's my personal opinion, I just don't like these kinda excruciatingly slow novelsCharacter design needs a lot of improvement, I recommend research on psychology author, your character is VERY inconsistent with what you tell him or try to portray him as, to me it seems as though you have no idea how truly prideful individuals behave and I'm not talking about ones that hide their insecurities with a layer of pride and arrogance I'm talking about truly prideful ones, they don't go around gawking at anything remotely "impressive" like your character does because to them, they themselves are more impressive than majority of stuff around them, they don't really show a lot of emotions either, you really just forget about your characters pride majority of time, that's not how that works man.World background is ok I guess, since we haven't really explored a lot in this area. My review can change in future.Tho ngl, this is pretty good if you're writing for the first time author. I hope you improve in the future.

This is honestly my first review on this site, and I have to say that this novel deserves it, simply because of the fact that this was such an awesome and pleasant novel to read, my only regret is the that I Burnt through these chapters like a drug addict on his second roll of weed, and If I were to describe what this novel is it would be the equivalent of what KonoSuba is to the Isekai genre, and what this novel is to the rest of the Chinese trash transmigration novels. Keep up the good work Mr. author, as it would be a shame of such a gem like this were to be dropped or abandoned.

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Diran: Mom do you love me??

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Yuuichi Sister: "Hey Bro! How was your sleep!"