Reading few the first batch of chapters was rather delightful.Theo has a great sense of pacing and character, and it really comes out in how his MC interacts with the people around him.There's a great sense of realism in how the MC thinks and responds, and overall I feel this story is a solid start that will blossom into something amazing.That said, there are some noticeable errors in writing that can be easily fixed with an editing pass or two, and I feel like more can be done to distinguish the settings, especially where the games occur.Solid 4.6 for now.
