Please provide compensation through divorce. - Reviews

refreshing novel. the first sports genre qidian novel I ever read. in chapter 1 the translation is nice and the editing is good, at least for me. cant wait to continue reading this novel. and to those saying its insult to sport lol read the book first before saying anything. if you still insist to doesnt like this novel then i suggest you don't read it

Zhanye , a story based in his own life being famous as Youtuber called "Zy" but he made shit after that,  selled your friendship for R$200,00 in "Be a Member" in YouTube (Brazilian Reals) after that more shit , he got exposed for pedophile with nudes of a 15 year old girl and more shit joking about the situation 1 month after this

As a rookie author myself i hope your novel does well and you enjoy writing. All the best on the trails ahead.As a reader, I found the premise of your story to be very intriguing, especially with the heavenly tribulation origins. The world has potential for intrigue and grabbing someone's attention. I appreciate the creativity.As for the con, the conversations between the characters are not organic, making it feel unreal and stiff. Also, the transition between the different scenes seemed a little rushed. In my eyes, your novel has potential as long as you work on the interactions and the pacing. Those are my humble two cents as a reader. All the best!!!

Disclaimer: Types of stories like these are not my cup of tea, so I won’t lie, I did not go far in this story. But from what I read, I will give an honest review. It is a good story for readers who lije stiff like this. Your writing is good and interesting, although you have grammar mistakes that need to be fixed(dialogue and the big spaces you have between the commas). Break up your paragraphs a little, too. Other than that I seen no other problems, your character building is good and the ones who like stories like this, will enjoy it. Keep up the good work!

It's really interesting to read. It's makes you want to read MORE.(ImasjsbsnjWANTaksbsjsjdbeejsjbdMOREnamsjsnsbsjPLEASEakskskjsksjsjADDalksjsjsjshsnMOREkaksksbdjsksjsIsssssDONT have any thing else to say Why is it not posting???)

The writing quality of the story is engaging and dynamic, effectively capturing the reader's attention. The narrative flows smoothly, with well-constructed sentences and vivid descriptions that bring scenes to life. Dialogue is natural and reveals character personalities effectively. The blend of action, emotion, and world-building is well-balanced, maintaining a steady pace. However, there are occasional grammatical errors and typos that could benefit from further editing. Overall, the writing is compelling, with strong potential for immersive storytelling.

Strength: 10 >> 13.5

He said as he opened his backpack and grabbed a bunch of ratios.

Meu pai sabia que nossa familia era unida, Ele escolheria o melhor para ser o próximo chefe sem rancores nem nada.

Yao Ming Yi

O professor levou as duas até a área das Pokébolas que estavam na mesa, Isaac sabia que eram Chikorita, Totodile e Cyndaquil, "Eu quero todos" Pensou Isaac com os olhos brilhando.

"Uh-huh." I slowly said