I read first chapter just to look how it is, but suddenly I got hooked in and was kept reading and reading. This has great potential and will do good if given some exposure. Keep it up!
The story is well written and the plot of the story is also just great. Author have out much effort in it. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I can't say much here, but if you read the sypnosis, you should know about the story, it might not be as exciting as you thought of it and I apologize for that, I truly lack of experience
I love how the story flows, not too fast and not too slow.. the first chapter is also cool.. it's like I am reading a manga book in words. the imaginative world is also cool.. keep it up
This novel is written quite nicely, even though there are a few improvements that can be done. Nevertheless, this writer has never ceased to put more and more effort in his novels. Can’t wait to see what happens next for this one.
This, in my opinion, could grow into something amazing if given the chance and support. Just stick with it while the author polishes their skills and you might just find a gem.
