i can't talk about writing quality since i'm not good with that myselfsince some chaps are locked i won't talk about stabilitystory: mc has too clear memory of things, most people will have at most hazy memory of things they've did in the past if they didn't repeat that thing memories much. Mc also for some fuckin reson just jumps into bed of women, stress can make someone less rational but for **** sake mc is going for sage look but he doesn't care about stdscharacters are lifelikeworld background aside from being a little unrealistic it's okay
