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I really thought this book has a lot of potential. I think it was not given a fair judgment. The ML was clear he has a lot of guilt from his last mission, he loves beautiful women ( which man don't), and he is in hiding so he must be invisible. Wish I knew where I could get to read more of this novel and see how it develope.

it is a great story with a foreshadowing of mana in the story despite its medieval take. I am just blue balled that volume 2 is not here yet hahahah

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almost the time for lunch loki finished all the paper works on his table and then he suddenly call callie "callie, come here didn't they give you a handbook for your duties and responsibilities?"...

-A part becomes pure energy that can easily be assimilated by a cultivation technique;

"But you're a corper nau, government pikin. You can still serve anywhere."

     "My brother, silly!"

Another punch came through me and I landed .Today is your end you stupid boy,he drag me away me without noticing that am bleeding heavily ,threw me to a dust place and heard many crowd screaming .Wait what am I doing here 'I said to my self'  then another  scream arose from no where ,the land started shaking and the light went round then I notice the man behind me . what the fuck' I shouted'

but they were about to say something when they felt a force of emotion it felt sad and depressing everyone around was now one the ground crying or stuggling to start crying and some are talking quiet like they gone creazy but ruby look at her friends and sister smiling then point at the screen in the sky to which they did but slowly then saw something like a glyphs like weiss

yo, the book is quite fantastic, you did good on the character, and the background details are nice to, but what really got my attention was, DUN DA DA DAAA "the fox" books with foxes are my favorite. love you, love your book, and I can't wait for the next book or the next chapter

Well, I do my best, so… 5/5It’s a tough adventure for me, and I am late with updates more often than not, but I am quite happy with what have become of this story - and will continue until I finish it, though I am not going to bet on the ending being good, it’s my first time after all.Either way, it’s free, so check it out, tell your friends, and maybe review?