personal7 - Reviews

If you are here for an Itachi adventure in ATG, you may be disappointed. His characterisation here is so far removed from the original, it's hard to see him as Itachi.If you are here for Yun Che with sharingaan, you may find it refreshing. I'm in the first camp so I've gone as far as I can with it.??Writing Quality - good. Updating Stability - apparently dropped, but seems to have been ok while it ran.Character Design - more could have been done with Itachi. Even where he would have done the same as Yun Che, the motivation would be materially different

The fact that Qidian has the audacity to make this novel premium even though this wasn't fully trasnlated by them just pisses me the **** off. I would understand premium if and when it is a Qidian original, but this novel has already been translated by other sites and being premium at 100 chapters is just disgusting.

His little sister and Tong Yuan or whatever ruins it..........................."..........................

Pretty good so far, the writing quality is good. The fast-pace doesn't feel rushed, rather it's effective.It's a little bit rough, but like author said, he just upload it and plans on editing it afterward.The only thing that'd bug me so far would be the world background, but I guess since it's only the beginning, all of that will be further developed in the future.The story's quite intriguing, too.The story has potential--I mean, i'm no expert, that's for sure, but from what I see, it has potential to grow well if author keeps it up.Good job.

The title is enough for someone to get interested in it.. Story is really good. It's a story which will affect directly in your heart... Good job author... I loved it...

The writing style and the plot of this novel are just flawless...The only problem I have with this novel is that there are only a few chapters to binge read...

Hi author here.sorry for not uploading any chapter for a week.Sometimes we face a problem in our life.It can be very painful if you receive that pain from the person you love most.But i understand one thing that Don't believe money is everything. New chapter coming today.

"I know this info from professor Oak" End looking for reasons using the name prof. Oak.

THIS NOVEL IS DROPPED

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The moon was at its brightest, but it was nowhere near the cacophonic white light that blinded them all that fateful day. However, it emitted enough light for her to search through the rubble.

With this hundreds of drones went to the portal to investigate the new world and gathering probes.