The primary issue I have with this novel is that the author fails to utilize the system effectively. In numerous instances where the protagonist could have leveraged the system's benefits, the author sideline it, resulting in storylines that lack depth and relevance. For instance, during the early business arc, the MC could have gained skills in business, accounting, leadership, public speaking, and negotiation through point redemption, but these opportunities were unexplored.
Several other aspects stand out:
(1) The author's portrayal of societal norms feels outdated, even by the standards of younger generations in China. Furthermore, he incorporates debunked concepts across various disciplines, including social, psychological, biological, medical, and historical knowledge.
(2) Character development is weak. Characters often act hostile towards one another without clear motivation, serving as a crutch for action sequences. The author frequently undermines seemingly good characters by revealing negative traits or backstory, suggesting a bias against genuine goodness.
(3) The narrative borrows heavily from mid-1980s to early-1990s Hong Kong action and comedy films, which can offer insights into the story's origins and the author's influences. However, this reliance on clichés might limit the narrative's originality.
(4) The story lacks a moral compass or consistency. Characters behave unpredictably and without consequence, with other characters accepting their actions mindlessly. The author attempts to justify these actions through forced explanations, which fall flat.
(5) Starting around Chapter 300, the novel becomes riddled with racism and jingoism.rape and even justifies the romantic relationship between a rape victim and her attacker, occurring around Chapter 580, which is highly problematic.
In summary, the novel misses opportunities to engage with its system, presents outdated views, has shallow character development, borrows from dated genres, lacks moral grounding, and contains disturbing themes.