Peek a boo - Reviews

In my opinion, this novel isn’t #1 rank material, but the author is a genius for bribing ppl with extra chapters for power stones. Writing quality is not the worse but still pretty bad, lots of misspelling and wrong words used. Once example, ‘integration’ is frequently used instead of ‘interrogation’. Although this happens quite a lot, the real problem is the way the story is written. The writing style is too shallow, it doesn’t give you the sense that you are immersed in the story world. There are not enough details to describe the character and environment. Up to now I still can’t picture what the characters and the school look like. One reviewer compared this with Lord of the Mysteries, which is just absurd. The writing style of LoM makes you feel like you are inside the MC’s head, immersed in his thoughts, emotions, and actions. This novel feels like you’re reading a summary of the MC’s daily activities, it is detached and doesn’t bring you up close and personal.Story development is progressing nicely so far. Contains your typical tropes and plot armor, but it’s not as absurdly done as other webnovels. Not much else to say since the novel is just beginning.Character design: It’s too early to tell but so far just 2 characters have hints of hidden depth, which could lead somewhere interesting. For now, the characters seem very shallow. The characters need to be fleshed out more, especially regarding their physical descriptions. Vague descriptions like ‘short brown hair and tall figure’ and ‘long blonde hair and perfect proportions’ doesn’t cut it.World background has great potential. Not much is revealed yet, but there are portals to other worlds and different species and factions, which leaves much to be discovered. Overall, I like the novel. There are only 108 chapters released so far, so there is room for improvement. I look forward to seeing how this novel progresses, it definitely has great potential.

Hi!Im the MC. Right now I'm kinda weak, but that will soon change! Shocking, right? You might get in to my adventures at the beginning, as I jump from level to level (or star) on my fiery steroids. I might meet a incredibly attractive girl(s - as in: many) that might like me! And also, I might piss of a sect or two... Or a dozen... Ish. Roughly 2/3 of the organisations I meet will want my head on a pike 'couse of my stupid antics, but hey, Mc, right? After all, the young should couse trouble as our below 20 (AS THE NOVEL AUTHOR REMINDS US THREE TIMES PER CHAPTER) years of age Mc does borderline idiotic stuff, but heyyy, it's alright.Power creep is a thing tho. No matter as I try, my opponents are always 2-5 stars higher than me! Even when I reach the "omg so strong, rarely seen elite" there are always dozens of stronger people around every corner! Baffling, really. But it's ok! I can beat them! After all, during the time they cast their mega dao technique I can wait 15 minutes or so as peanut gallery has a half chapter long conversation how awesome my opponent is and how deadly and fast his strike is - history background included.At least, my team waifu is also included in power creep! Hurray! Although, I do wonder how the girls do it sometimes... No matter. There is always someone who jumps in the fight at the last moment! Sometimes it's me, saving people I met once like 5 years ago, or sometimes it's some new enemy to save my sworn enemies I was thiiiiis close to killing. Boy, does this happen a lot, huh.Hope you like to read about fictional plants never before mentioned anywhere before as I throw them to the pot for several chapters! Be thrilled as I make my steroid coctail of thunder summoning pills! I like to make them, so be prepared.Crazy Waifu Collecting Alchemist Adventures! Out now!Also: rape.

His eyes flash as he open them and his aura surge.

"OKAY! Okay! I get it! Ill take the damn Ford!"

I'm not even concerned about that.

Jika itu benar kesalahan suaminya, dia tidak akan segan untuk melaporkannya. Tapi jika dia hanya korban dari kebohongan yang berkedok bakti seorang anak kepada ayahnya, dia tidak akan bisa menerimanya.

My line of work is pretty similar to the king of hell, I never liked this title "king of hell, I always prefered "the fallen angel" or perhaps "the most beautiful angel in the heaven

"Are you fucking crazy, I could have killed you!" The lady yells.

And all that glitters is gold

"We promised… we promised that we would be together forever."

good book author. but could you please post it on another author's website so that I and other readers can read your work for free author. Please

You took good care of making the script catchy since the beginning. That gave me wanna read the next chapters. I follow the adventures of Eram with pleasure. Just make sure you correct all the typos in the early chapters. Take your time and reread your work prior to publishing it. I left a lot of comments. Don't hesitate to reach out to me, I'm happy to exchange.