Patro Aham - A story written by fate, rewritten by will. - Reviews

Great novel imotbh absolutely ZERO BIAS with this opinion !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah woohoo....................

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Mind blowing creativity! ?Magacrafter, I look forward to more stories from you. The character design ?, language use (diction) ✅, and how the conflict raises.

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The story is quite good with a fast paced development (im 30 chapters in). The first few chapters could have been put into one because they were unnecessarily and last but not least - 30 chapters in and i can't tell if Nori is a boy or girl - what the hell does nonbinary even mean!!!!

"Makanlah. Ahjuma bilang akhir-akhir ini kau jarang makan." bujuk Sehun. Yoona tetap tidak menghiraukannya. Gadis itu malah memasukkan makanan itu kedalam keranjang. "yak, sedikit saja." menahan tangan gadis itu yang terus memasukkan makanan yang ada disana.

"Y-Yeah. What was it again?"

Because in present time, he had his hands and feet bound to a moldy chair in the depths of a mildewed, dank basement. His whole body hurt all over from multiple cuts and bruises. Men in suits surrounded him, staring at him impassively through their coal black shades, firearms strapped to their sides.

Everyone giggled and start to laugh.

And all that glitters is gold

you find love where you least expect it.