Paths Unseen - Reviews

This story had my attention from the very beginning! I LOVE the way Nox loves Lilac! It’s hard to say which one of her stories are my favorite because they’re all great but this along with Violet and Ash (a must read btw) are definitely in my top 3! Lilac is so badass!

Ill give a try to this one, i checked the other ones and mage of primordial chaos did catch my attention but once i saw the tragedy tag i ran away xD

I love your writing, especially on the prologue, it captivated the readers to visualize it like a scene in a movie. And it goes to the next chapters as well. I can see, hear, and taste each scenes as you write it. You are very good at this one. Good job author!

the book has been intriguing and interesting so far and i hope it continues to improve

She is actually Meng Gu's mother! How can it be? Such a young mother!

"I'll come back, No matter what it takes. I'll come back alive."

This gave us the opportunity to resume our crawl. With the sun gone, it was a bit easier to sneak through the rice fields since all we had to do was make small movements and avoid searchlights.

Ayah – sebab seandainya ikan satu mati kamu masih punya dua ikan nak

You'll never know if you don't go (go!)

How could he know that it was possible to use this moment to blow a hole in the Dungeon's ceiling and allow for every monster to flow out? Heck, it even affected the forest outside!

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I just started writing my own rugby novel, your's is far by far better than mine.