Path of the Eternal Dao - Reviews

é meio difícil começar a ler algo de um autor que mal tem a capacidade de terminar uma novel antes de começar a escrever outras 10 sem motivo nenhum. então não sei...

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Why do people like this? The story is cancerous. I try to be optimistic about stories and give it a chance. I get you want to look cool and shameless but when his Beast gets hurt and he doesn't get angry but instead sucks up to the perpetrator more that's when I lost it.The fact that it's only 700 chapters brings me at ease, at least it quickly gets conclusive.But the other doesn't even bother to explain things for you and everything like a badly brought draft. Well I guess it's not the first time you've seen a CN like this.

The sentence arrangement and word choice made me want to keep reading, but unfortunately, some chapters were too short for me, or maybe I was too busy reading that I didn't feel the time was passing so fast

Nice. Story is just the thing I was looking for thank you. Moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee

Read up to chapter 6. My thoughts are thus:Quality: 5/5. Pretty easy rating to give, the writing and editing quality is superb. Not a jot or a title out of place.Development: 3/5. Not to say that it isn't interesting, but there's a lot, and I mean, A LOT, of exposition and "telling" as opposed to "showing

Its good and all but where spider man updates dude?                                                                                                                                                                                                             ???

The author's writing stability *was* quite excellent not all that long ago, and by making some presumptions and assumptions based on little more than the odd author's note and Gurgj's intuition(in exchange for some crunchings and munchings, of course) I have proven beyond a shadow of a doubt that the author's recent delinquency can be placed solely on the shoulders of Caillou. Because that cancer-patient wannabe is blamed for nothing and causes all that is wrong in this world.But otherwise yeah, Born A Monster is creative, interesting, and tickles something fierce both my schadenfreude bone and my sympathy/pity bone(s). (*whispers* They're all the same bone. It's a nice bone. It's a better book.)

Honestly poor grammar/english and over use of the world "mam" really dont understand why. World building so far and character introductions are poor

When her father looked over at the disturbance, he froze, then turned white. He then made a grab for Sonja's phone but it was grabbed in the nick of time by Sonja instead. Mother Moreno, curious at how a notification from her daughter's phone could cause such disturbance was waiting for an explanation.

10 mins na lang kukunin na siya sa akin. Di ko ata kaya.

His power relies on his thoughts. Let's say he imagined getting no luck in a lottery ticket before buying a lottery ticket and then when he bought it he would have seen that it was a winning ticket. But after that he would be in a unlucky state which lasted depending on the probability of the action actually happening without his abilities. The reason why he was happy that his power came back was cause the last time he used his power he used it on a