Past Life——Reborn - Reviews

A great story with a lot of diverse settings and people, my only gripe about the story is with the somewhat rushed ending. But overall a great read.

I’ve only read the first 50 chapters but I enjoy the story so far. I got annoyed at some of the character interactions, for example: I don’t like talking to kids like they are stupid, but it didn’t ruin the story. I feel as though it has gotten better the more I have read and I was tempted to drop at first but am glad I gave it a chance.

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Well, the concept of the story is nice. Minor grammatical errors that can be fixed in a jiffy and other than that I feel some paragraphs were a bit long but I have the same problem but otherwise I think it's a well thought out concept

Although Chi had added seals that would instantly clean floors, walls, counters, tables, chairs, and other objects; a place like this needs staff to deal with laundry, making sure the lawn and gardens were maintained, taking account on supplies, and other numerous tasks that runes and seals could not do.  It would require for her to actually hire people to create the staff, however Chi doubts that there would be anyone available who would want to work for a prince who was exiled.

"How are you here?"

Yuna berkata sambil membalikkan wajahnya ke arah belakang punggungnya.

Now Naisha had enough, she didn't have time to entertain them.

"Wait for me, please. "Burgundy rushed towards Aiden. When she was standing by his side, she turned back to Cilan and said: "I will come back and defeat you, so wait for me. "

We're having us a big dinner. Dara lynn's dipping bread in her glass of cold tea, the way she likes, and Becky pushes her beans up over the edge of her plate in her rush to get 'em down.

"Then what do you mean!"

"Well, those are just one of the hundreds of spell I've already made. And what's better, you can't find these anywhere else! After all, I'm the only one who can use Magic Construction!"